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Post by Malthorn on Jun 11, 2006 14:20:08 GMT -5
You used again twice....and both at the end of lines.
As much as Haiku's cant suck, yours did.
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Ipit
Legacy of the Void Officer
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Post by Ipit on Jun 11, 2006 16:42:33 GMT -5
Damn, I can't remember the rulings for making a Haiku anymore.
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Post by Dread on Jun 11, 2006 16:49:04 GMT -5
Mal, you like men.
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Post by Malthorn on Jun 11, 2006 19:04:25 GMT -5
Line 1) 5 Syllables Line 2) 7 Syllables Line 3) 5 Syllables
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Post by Dread on Jun 11, 2006 20:02:49 GMT -5
Sometimes it can be in 3,5,3 stature thank you very much, or so I've been told by a teacher who turned out to be an alcoholic....alot of my teachers end up being drunks...I wonder why that is >_>
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Post by Malthorn on Jun 11, 2006 22:34:43 GMT -5
You?
You are the cause!
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Stompshifter
Legacy of the Void Officer
Disgusting. . .
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Post by Stompshifter on Jun 11, 2006 22:53:28 GMT -5
Stomp rules you. you will suck the balls. cept for duels.
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Post by Dread on Jun 11, 2006 23:13:36 GMT -5
I feel raped just reading that Stomp
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